Romeo's Thoughts

Near the end of the story:

SpookySprsonic1: I have to admit, I'm dying to know what you think of it. All you've said is "I like it"

Romeo: im going to bed in about 10 mins

SpookySprsonic1: well, maybe you'll tell me at some point. I've only been trying to get you to read it for 4 years

Romeo: i will tell you when its done, just know that there have been times when i read another chapter because i couldnt put it down

SpookySprsonic1: :-) excellent!

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After finishing the story

Romeo: holy shit
Romeo: your book was awesome
Romeo: why the fuck dont you put that talent to use and write an original...

SpookySprsonic1: it was??

Romeo: because you would have to build up the characters before you made their world come crashing around them 2 dozen times?

SpookySprsonic1: Yes lol

Romeo: write a series
Romeo: you have to start somewhere

SpookySprsonic1: I'm so surprised you liked it, really

Romeo: i was 3 chapters from the end and i couldnt put it down
Romeo: stayed up waaaaaayyyy too late
Romeo: of course it had to have a happy ending

SpookySprsonic1: the end is good I think, minus the stupid cheeseball wedding

Romeo: but in the sequel does voldemort get out of whatever that was they put him in?

SpookySprsonic1: maybe

Romeo: well im not gonna read it till you have it done
Romeo: cant deal with waiting for you to write another chapter

SpookySprsonic1: lol, it isnt as good as the first one

Romeo: sequels never are
Romeo: how many chapters are done?

SpookySprsonic1: I'm about to finish ch 19

Romeo: i suppose i could start reading that
Romeo: will give me something to do now that i finished teh first one
Romeo: so which characters are the ones you made up?

SpookySprsonic1: it doesnt leave you hanging on the edge of your seat
SpookySprsonic1: I made up sara, Greg Sanders, Neville's gf Mary, Nikolae, anything having to do with Romania,
SpookySprsonic1: Liam Seever, Regina Thomas (quidditch)

Romeo: i thought you put a sex scene in that book.... wasnt that lame scene just before sara left for 2 years

SpookySprsonic1: yes, that was it. I didnt feel that sort of description belonged in HP

Romeo: lol

SpookySprsonic1: I also made up the Orb of Arassell, the Fortificus Charm, the Amidon, the Amoridon, the Mini-Pensieve, the Crux Cube and many other things

Romeo: they were all very clever things
Romeo: me not ever really paying attention to harry potter did not know what was or wasnt made up by you
Romeo: congrats,... you fooled me

SpookySprsonic1: Everything in the book is about 60% original
SpookySprsonic1: and it surprises people to know that about 80% of the story was made up on the spot as I wrote it

Romeo: so replace harry potter with larry spotster and dumbldore with bumblefuck... and draco with shithead... and its now original

SpookySprsonic1: LOL!! Bumblefuck
SpookySprsonic1: I wish I could just change the names. I could keep most of it, like the raven and stuff that I made up
SpookySprsonic1: but I cant keep the story intact without magic
SpookySprsonic1: my fav twist that I came up with is definately Nikolae using Polyjuice potion to pose as Sara

Romeo: yes
Romeo: i saw it coming

SpookySprsonic1: I planted hints

Romeo: also knew that the attack was going to happen at harrys house

SpookySprsonic1: yeah, I hate that most of my readers were so young that I couldnt be as obscure as I wanted

Romeo: and it shoud have been a lust potion for sara and draco
Romeo: would have been more "steamy"

SpookySprsonic1: lol, Sara isnt that weak
SpookySprsonic1: I also thought problems were solved too quickly and there was far too much drinking

Romeo: you wrote about what you were doing while you wrote it... getting wasted

SpookySprsonic1: lol, very true. But really I was trying to get into the adolescent mindset and it didnt come out right

Romeo: is the sequel on the same website?

SpookySprsonic1: yes
SpookySprsonic1: its on my author page right below girl in the tower

Romeo: i found it
Romeo: im reading the one below that

SpookySprsonic1: oh Paris lol One Night in Cairo is MUCH better, but it isnt finished
SpookySprsonic1: oh, I made Morgio up too
SpookySprsonic1: if you want to read something thats short, but is actually good, read Disturbing the Dust

Romeo: what the fuck
Romeo: you cant make sara sleep with draco
Romeo: thats just wrong

SpookySprsonic1: that was a sort of fantasy story for the fangirls
SpookySprsonic1: you will like "Dust" better

Romeo: maybe i will read these before starting the sequel... that shoud give you time to write 6 or 7 more chapters
Romeo: ultimatly giving you 4 extra days before i catch up and start yellin at you for not writing fast enough

SpookySprsonic1: I cant tell you thrilled I am that you liked it
SpookySprsonic1: I told you I could write lol

Romeo: "how"
Romeo: you forgot the word HOW

SpookySprsonic1: i see that
SpookySprsonic1: oh yeah, you were to be the judge, I told you I did an inadequate job of decribing the emotional impact of music
SpookySprsonic1: some things are too hard to put into words

Romeo: you did an exquisite job

SpookySprsonic1: thank you
SpookySprsonic1: when I rewrite, I will be changing thier wedding to what I originally planned to write. Secret, and at night

Romeo: no way
Romeo: i like the fact that sara has to confront harry's relatives

SpookySprsonic1: she still will. The reception will be the same and the people invited to the wedding can all take a portkey
SpookySprsonic1: but I want some sort of threat
SpookySprsonic1: maybe wormtail, who will be finally killed

Romeo: huh?
Romeo: why dont you focus on the sequel

SpookySprsonic1: yeah, I need him for the sequel anyway. Idk, I just always hated the wedding. That's why I made it funny
SpookySprsonic1: I also plan to give Harry and Sara a few more problem re-adjusting after she returns. I like the argument they have outside the house when he takes her to see it

Romeo: wait... what argument
Romeo: what wa sit about?
Romeo: something he had built and she didnt know about...?
Romeo: i dont remember

SpookySprsonic1: when she asks him why he painted the doors black

Romeo: ooh
Romeo: ok

SpookySprsonic1: it just seems more realistic that they would have difficult moments, instead of everything's oh-so-wonderful

Romeo: yeah
Romeo: i would say sara almost being killed all the time is quite diffcult

SpookySprsonic1: lol, you start to think she might actually die

Romeo: yeah
Romeo: heart wrenching

SpookySprsonic1: did you catch my error? Voldemort takes blood from her wrist to sabotage her wedding, then raises the knife to kill her

Romeo: lol
Romeo: why did he take teh blood... why didnt he just kill her then??

SpookySprsonic1: because he had to sabotage her wedding after she was dead! LOL

Romeo: i mean he had time to get out a vile... open it, collect the blood, then stow it safely in his cloak...

SpookySprsonic1: stupid, isnt it?

Romeo: had plenty of time to just kill her

SpookySprsonic1: I have a bunch of stupid stuff in there

Romeo: yaknow i didnt think of it at the time
Romeo: but it made for an interesting plot so who cares

SpookySprsonic1: exactly!
SpookySprsonic1: lol

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